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Post by animagess on Jun 26, 2005 17:59:14 GMT -5
Hey. I'm new here, and I've got to go soon, but I'll be back tomorrow to start discussing the movie like normal folk. And my user name is supposed to have a capital 'A' in it. Really. I've just finished a 60-page novelization of Donnie Darko and am currently taking the site for a test spin. If ya wanna help me out, you can go read it here: www.angelfire.com/film2/animagess/So! Feedback would be nice... if you actually have the time to read this thing. If not, just tell me if any of the links are broken, blah blah blah. If you do read, I hope you enjoy it and tell your friends. Hopefully it makes you think a little. I had a lot of fun writing it... Okay, Im done shamelessly plugging.  |
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Post by Phil on Jun 26, 2005 18:23:37 GMT -5
i have the attention span of a lamp, so i proabably wont read it tbh, but i might try if i get proper bored lol so sorry, i cant comment as to weather there are mistakes or anything like that welcome to the site  |
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Post by ProvidencePortal on Jun 26, 2005 18:47:24 GMT -5
had a skim. i like your style. your environmental elements are vivid and real-feeling. and it struck me as interesting to see the novelization written in past tense, rather than present. added a weight I wouldn't have expected.
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Post by Omnipotent on Aug 26, 2005 9:16:23 GMT -5
I liked the disclaimer "I’m not a psychotic fan of Donnie Darko like some people are. I really liked the movie, and I own it, but my waking life isn’t consumed by it". Yeah that explains why you re-wrote the film in your own way.  |
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Post by sarahuk on Aug 29, 2005 12:55:22 GMT -5
I liked the disclaimer "I’m not a psychotic fan of Donnie Darko like some people are. I really liked the movie, and I own it, but my waking life isn’t consumed by it". Yeah that explains why you re-wrote the film in your own way. nice!! |
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Post by knifeplay on Jun 14, 2008 18:57:13 GMT -5
i read some, i really didnt like it sorry.
i dont know what inspired you to re-write a classic and change it
no one said "yo" in the late 80's - fault 1
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Post by Omnipotent on Jun 16, 2008 0:17:58 GMT -5
no one said "yo" in the late 80's - fault 1 Clearly you don't listen to hip-hop music. Example... "Like a gambler in Vegas, I go for broke/ To make a long story short, yo I ain’t no joke" - Big Daddy Kane (1988) |
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Post by knifeplay on Jun 18, 2008 2:18:04 GMT -5
i mean in middle-class suburbia
parents were scared of that shit
it what they heard on the transistor radio while washing their klan hoods
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Post by Omnipotent on Jun 22, 2008 11:28:04 GMT -5
it what they heard on the transistor radio while washing their klan hoods Hahaha |
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Post by Jake on Aug 28, 2012 1:01:52 GMT -5
You are immediately a better person for having done this (and for having seen this movie). I really was impressed, I must say. You are an excellent writer. To be honest, I was a bit put-off at first because some of the dialogue was not directly quoted, but all-in-all, it was an impressive work. Congratulations and good luck in your future in writing.
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